I'm running late this week (lately when am NOT?), so I apologize for that. I'm hiding at my desk at the EDJ and doing this on my phone, so fingers crossed. *g*
Today we see Mateus and Crawford right after they've come back to the United States. They were hoping it would go smoothly, but of course it doesn't. They're stuck in the border town overnight until the immigration officer can see them the next morning.
Tall, Dark and Deported
Mateus flopped down on the queen-sized bed, wrinkling his nose when he bounced instead of sinking into it. This was nothing like the feather-soft beds at [hotel name], though the rock-hard mattress and slick nylon coverlets were hardly a surprise for a place that rented for $59 a night.
Crawford had tried to book them into a nicer hotel down the street, but Mateus's pride wouldn't allow it. He'd been mooching off Crawford for too long—it was Mateus's turn to foot some of the bill for this, especially since they were stuck here overnight because of him. Unfortunately, he couldn't afford down comforters and 500-thread-count sheets. But the room did come with a free continental breakfast in the morning, which was kind of exciting.
He closed his eyes and listened to Crawford fumbling with the tiny coffeemaker on the bathroom sink. It was late, but he didn't say anything. He'd learned not to come between Crawford and caffeine, no matter what time of day Crawford was having it. [insert earlier snipy fight over coffee late at night]
Something clattered into the sink with an echoing thud and Crawford cursed softly. Mateus peeked open one eye in time to see him angrily shoving the piece back into the coffeemaker.
“I saw a Starbucks a mile or so back. I think I'm going to give up on this and make a coffee run. You want a decaf cinnamon latte?”
So maybe Mateus hadn't been the only one taking notes on beverage preferences. He tried hard to ignore the fluttery feeling he got knowing Crawford had been paying attention all those nights they'd stopped at the hotel coffee shop for a drink after dinner.
“If you're going out anyway. But don't make a special trip for me.”
Crawford snorted. “I've got about four hours of paperwork to get through tonight. Trust me, I'm going anyway. Possibly more than once.”
Mateus winced internally. Crawford had been so amazing through all of this, never once getting angry about how much this marriage had inconvenienced him. Even now, staying in a second-rate motel with a nonfunctional coffeemaker, he didn't snap or try to make Mateus feel bad. Instead, he offered to pick up his favorite evening drink while he went out to get coffee to fuel a late-night work session that was necessary because he'd spent all day doing things for Mateus.
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Wednesday, December 16, 2015
Wednesday, March 25, 2015
WIP Wednesday: King of the Kitchen
As some of you already know from Twitter and Facebook, I recently started a new job. I've been a freelance writer and editor for eight years, so heading back into a structured professional environment was a bit daunting.
I was worried it would really put a damper on my writing, since I have considerably less time to do it in. But I guess I shouldn't have worried, because we all know creativity is kind of like a gas--it expands to fill whatever space you can give it, and mine is going gangbusters in the smaller space I've allotted for it now.
Which is good, because I've got two projects with quickly approaching deadlines, and I'd be pretty well screwed if I wasn't cranking out chapters. *g*
I thought I'd start a WIP Wednesday feature here on the blog to keep you updated on what's on my plate--and it also helps keep me accountable, since I have to make sure I have a new snippet to share each week.
Today I'm sharing part of a scene from King of the Kitchen, my rival-chefs-turn-lovers lark that is due out in early November. I'm skating up hard and fast to that manuscript deadline, so send good wishes for Beck and Duncan to keep chattering away in my head so I can get them onto the page!
I was worried it would really put a damper on my writing, since I have considerably less time to do it in. But I guess I shouldn't have worried, because we all know creativity is kind of like a gas--it expands to fill whatever space you can give it, and mine is going gangbusters in the smaller space I've allotted for it now.
Which is good, because I've got two projects with quickly approaching deadlines, and I'd be pretty well screwed if I wasn't cranking out chapters. *g*
I thought I'd start a WIP Wednesday feature here on the blog to keep you updated on what's on my plate--and it also helps keep me accountable, since I have to make sure I have a new snippet to share each week.
Today I'm sharing part of a scene from King of the Kitchen, my rival-chefs-turn-lovers lark that is due out in early November. I'm skating up hard and fast to that manuscript deadline, so send good wishes for Beck and Duncan to keep chattering away in my head so I can get them onto the page!
King of the Kitchen
“If
you wanted to impress me, you'd have to do a hell of a lot better
than a plate of fatty ham and congealing hollandaise. We don't serve
eggs benedict in our restaurants, Charlie,” Beck said, eyeing the name on Duncan's chef's whites with disdain and
drawing it out like an insult, “and even if we did, I don't
appreciate having you encroach on my personal time with your pathetic
attempt at a job interview.”
Duncan's
mouth hung open, and he wavered between outraged and completely
confused. What was this guy talking about?
“Listen,
buddy. I was just being friendly,” Duncan snapped, choosing to go
with outraged. He left the plate in the pass through, pointedly
ignoring it—and the man—as he pulled a new ticket off the
carousel.
“Order
in! One deluxe hamburger, one order of chicken tenders, one spinach
fritatta!”
Duncan turned toward the kitchen to get started on the eggs but was pulled
up short by a hand on his shoulder.
“You
can't talk to me like that, buddy.”
Duncan scowled. “Of course, sir. The customer is always right. Yes, the
eggs benedict were part of a convoluted plan of mine to apply for a
job cooking for your, what?” He made a point of studying the
gorgeous guy's suit. “Office building? Hotel, maybe? I admit, it's
always been my life's ambition to run a carving station at a Marriott
buffet. How could you tell?”
Saturday, February 14, 2015
Love Hurts: A Valentine's Day freebie story!

A little background: Zeke and Hatcher are the main characters in the YA book I'm working on, Incoming Credits. This short picks up about six months after that book ends. The short and the book are both written in first person from Zeke's perspective.
Enjoy!
Love Hurts
I
scowled at the phone, dropping it on my bed without erasing the voice
mail. If Hatcher thought he could just apologize his way out of this
one, he was sorely mistaken. Sorely being the operative word.
Three
hours ago, I'd stormed out of Hatcher’s dorm room with my
proverbial tail between my legs, and he'd been calling and texting
nonstop ever since. Not that I'd answered any of them.
The
phone beeped with yet another incoming text. I ignored it. It was
probably just another variation on the I'm
sorry
messages he'd been sending every twenty minutes or so.
I
shifted on the bed, dislodging the makeshift ice pack my roommate
Chris had made me before he'd left for his date. Unlike some people
who shall remain nameless, he was taking the safe route, going with
dinner and a romantic walk through the park for his
Valentine's Day date.
That's
what I'd wanted to do, but no, Hatcher wanted to try something new.
It'll
be fun,
he'd said. What
could go wrong, it'll be fine,
he'd said.
I
glared down at Ziploc bag resting on my crotch. It hadn't been fine.
The
Tylenol I'd taken when I'd gotten home had helped, but it was
starting to throb more. That probably meant it was time for another
dose. More ice would probably help, too. But did it hurt enough to
justify putting on pants and limping down to the ice machine in the
basement? No sir, it did not.
Just
the thought of rough fabric touching the burn made me cringe. Sitting
through class was going to be fun tomorrow. It would have been okay
if it had been anything other than my drafting class. Most professors
didn't really care what you wore, but Professor Arnold had a dress
code in his syllabus. The first week of class a girl had been thrown
out for wearing sweatpants with the university logo on them, so I
didn't think my tattered plaid pajama pants—the softest pants I
owned and the only thing I would even consider letting close to my
crotch right now—would fare any better.
*.*.*.*
It
was nearly midnight when my phone pinged with an email from Hatcher.
I was expecting a lengthy apology, given the number of times he'd
been texting and calling, but it was just a few words and a link.
I
clicked on the link, my lips curving up into a grin despite my best
effort to frown as I read the playlist name: “Love Hurts.”
Hell
yes, it did. The track listings made me smile, too. I’d always been
amused by Hatcher’s dark sense of humor, and this was no exception.
Love
Hurts,
Nazareth
It
Hurts Like Hell,
Aretha Franklin
Why
Does It Hurt So Bad,
Whitney Houston
Hurt
like Mine,
The Black Keys
Sex
on Fire,
Kings of Leon
King
of Pain,
The Police
Burning
Love,
Elvis Presley
Sexual
Healing,
Marvin Gaye
It
was definitely an eclectic list, and I had to give Hatcher points for
creativity. It didn't make the burn hurt any less, but something in
my chest eased a bit. I hated fighting with Hatcher, even when I was
the one instigating it. And it hadn't really been his fault—it had
been an honest mistake, but my embarrassment had made it worse.
Really,
I was probably most upset by the fact that he'd thought our sex life
was boring. I mean, it's not like either of us have much experience,
but I'd thought things were good. What was I supposed to think when
his big Valentine's Day surprise ended up being a box of things to
spice up our sex life? That doesn't happen when your partner is
satisfied, right?
The
body chocolate Hatcher had ordered from some sex shop online hadn't
said it should be heated up, but we'd kind of figured it was like a
jar of hot fudge. He hadn't even put it in for that long—less than
a minute, for sure. But it had been more than hot enough to burn me
when he'd drizzled it on.
Thank
God he hadn't put it on my dick. Having a burn on the skin in the
crease of my thigh was bad enough. I couldn't imagine how much worse
it would feel in an even more sensitive area.
I
lifted the blanket and moved the ice pack aside, looking at the angry
red burn again. The chocolate had been hot enough to cause my skin to
blister, but it wasn't the worst burn I'd ever had. I'd done worse to
myself taking things out of the oven. Then again, those burns had
been on my hands. Not my groin.
Even
with most of the ice melted, the bag felt nice against my skin, so I
put it back. Chris wasn't coming back tonight, so I didn't need to
worry about pants until tomorrow morning.
I
settled back against the pillows, careful not to dislodge my ice
pack, and plugged my headphones into my phone. I hit play, grinning
when the first song started.
Hatcher
had texted a few more times, but I still wasn't ready to talk to him,
even though I'd already forgiven him.
Let
him suffer a little.
*.*.*.*
“Figured
you'd still be asleep.”
I
startled awake at Hatcher’s voice, nearly falling off my precarious
perch on the edge of my bed. I must have fallen asleep listening to
his playlist. It took me a minute to realize that the room wasn't
dark anymore. Sunlight poured in from the blinds that I'd forgotten
to close last night.
Oh
shit. It was morning.
“Fuck,
fuck, fuck!”
I
scrambled to get up. The Ziploc bag that had been full of ice last
night fell to the floor and burst open, splattering both of us with
cold water.
Hatcher
grabbed me by my shoulders and stopped me from face planting onto the
floor, but I squirmed against his hold.
“I
have class!” I muttered, wiping the droplets of water off my face
with the back of my hand once he let me go.
“You
had
class,” he said, his grin entirely too smug for this hour of the
morning. I didn't have time for this. Professor Arnold locked the
doors of the lecture hall at precisely 8:01 a.m. and didn't let
latecomers in. He only allowed one unexcused absence all semester; I
wasn't going to waste mine in February.
His
words sunk in a beat later, and I looked over at the alarm clock on
my nightstand. Fuck. It was almost nine.
I
stopped fighting against Hatcher's hold and slumped back against my
wet pillow. “Shit. I'm fucked.”
Hatcher
grinned, and even in my panicked and still pained state, my pulse
kicked up a notch. We hadn't had sex last night, what with the body
chocolate fiasco, and it had been days since the last time we'd
gotten off together. Even though I didn't feel remotely like having
sex, I'd missed that smile and all the dark promise it held.
“Yeah,
you would
be fucked, if I
hadn't gone to your professor
with the note from your doctor,” Hatcher drawled.
“If
I hadn't—what did you do?” I asked, terrified. Professor Arnold
was not the type to just accept an excuse—he'd call to check on the
validity of the note, and then I'd be in trouble for lying as well as
ditching class. My scholarships required a high GPA and no ethics
violations. “Oh my God, I'm going to get thrown out of school.”
The
smile slid off Hatcher's face, and he sat on the bed next to me, his
hands coming down to grab mine. “Hey, no. It was a real doctor's
note. I have some cream for your burn, too. And Dr. Hanson wants to
actually see you in person in a few days, or sooner if the cream
doesn't help.”
“Dr.
Hanson?”
Hatcher
grinned sheepishly. “My doctor here in town.”
Ah,
of course. Hatcher's richer-than-Midas parents wouldn't stoop to
letting him see a campus doctor at the health center like everyone
else. It made sense that he'd have a personal doctor here. Though he
hadn't been sick once all year. When had he met Dr. Hanson?
“You
know your doctor well enough to get him to write notes and give you a
prescription for a patient he hasn't even seen?”
Hatcher's
family might be crazy rich, but there had to be a limit to what money
could buy, right? Surely they weren't paying off doctors now.
“His
sister went to school with my aunt, I think. We know him somehow, at
least. And I have seen him. I had a physical in September when school
started. Mom insisted.” He tossed the tube of burn cream to me.
“It's not a prescription. Just regular over-the-counter stuff that
his nurse recommended. You're supposed to use it three times a day.”
I
rolled my eyes but uncapped it anyway. I'd been too panicked about
missing class to notice the pain when I'd woken up, but it was
definitely there now. The skin felt tender, and it pulled and stung
every time I moved. “Is there anywhere in the world you could go
that your family doesn't have some sort of connections?”
His
smile brightened. “The Winthrops haven't made a lot of inroads in
Asia. Want to move to Singapore?”
I
laughed. “Not even a little. So I need to go see your doctor?”
That
was going to cost me a pretty penny, I was sure. I doubted my Mom's
crappy health insurance was going to cover a doctor that Hatcher saw.
I still had some savings from working at the camp over the summer. I
couldn't call home and ask Mom for money—especially since she'd
want to know how I got injured in the first place.
Hatcher
watched me dab on the cream with obvious interest. I flushed,
remembering that I was completely naked. Not that I hadn't been naked
in front of him before. Just not this casually. I'd always insisted
on sleeping in at least a pair of boxers, since both of us have
roommates.
“He's
on retainer.”
Seriously?
That was a thing? I thought only lawyers were on retainer. Hell, I
wasn't even entirely sure what that meant.
Hatcher
seemed to pick up on my confusion. “My parents pay him a fee to
make sure he's available whenever I might need him. This kind of
visit is covered in that. Most minor things are.”
God.
I shouldn't be surprised, but Hatcher was so normal that it was easy
to forget just how wealthy his family was. Even when we'd been at
Winthrop Prep together, he and Leighton had been so much more down to
earth than the rest of the blue bloods. Here at Cornell, the divide
between heir to the Winthrop fortune Hatcher and normal Hatcher was
even more stark. He acted just like everyone else. Except for having
a doctor on retainer, apparently.
“Oh,”
I muttered, swallowing thickly. “Right. Erm, thanks.”
“Don't
be weird about it,” he said dismissively. “Besides, it's kind of
my fault you're hurt anyway.”
If
his interpretation of kind of was completely,
then yes. I gave him a dirty look but chose to let it go.
Though
next time Hatcher had an idea for how to spice things up in the
bedroom, I was going to insist he
be the guinea pig.
“So,”
Hatcher said brightly, nodding to my phone where it sat
on the mattress next to my pillow.
The earphones were still attached, making it obvious what I'd been
doing when I'd fallen asleep. “What did you think?”
I
snorted. “I think the last one was a bit optimistic. If you think
I’m going to let you anywhere near my –”
He
leaned in and kissed me, cutting me off mid sentence. I couldn't
complain. Kissing Hatcher was one of my favorite things in the world,
and he was being careful not to lean
on me and
aggravate my burn.
I brought my hands up and buried them in his hair, letting him lead
the kiss.
My
cheeks were flushed by the time he finally pulled back. “Was that
an apology?” I asked, earning a huff from him.
“Would
you accept it if it was, unlike the dozens of others I offered you
last night?”
My
blush deepened, this time out of embarrassment. I'd been really angry
last night, but after sleeping on it I could see how ridiculous it
had been to just storm out of his dorm room and not answer any of his
calls.
“Yes.”
His
smirk softened, and he peeked down at the burn. It looked worse than
it had last night, but it actually felt better, especially after
using the cream he'd brought. I wasn't going to be rushing into my
skinny jeans anytime soon, but I was pretty sure I could stomach
wearing sweats without wanting to die. That was progress.
“I
really am sorry. I should have read the directions, but I was just
too excited to use it. I wanted to make you feel good.”
The
confession took me off guard. “Really? It's not because you think
sex with me is boring?”
Hatcher
gaped at me. “What? No! That's what you thought?”
Relief
flooded through me. I hadn't realized just how worried I was that
Hatcher was getting tired of me until just now. Things between us had
gotten off to such a rocky start that we couldn't even agree on how
long we'd been dating. I count from the day I actually realized we
were dating—six months. But Hatcher counts from the day we started
our little friends with benefits arrangement, since he said he
thought we'd been dating all along—seven months.
Either
way, it had been plenty of time for someone as gorgeous and amazing
as Hatcher to realize he was wasting his time with someone as
ordinary as me.
“Yeah.
I mean, what was I supposed to think? You say you have big
Valentine's Day plans for us, and then you pull out this box of
stuff...”
I
trailed off, not sure how to explain how I'd felt when I'd seen the
silk scarves and padded handcuffs. There had been a vibrator, too,
but I'd been too mortified to really process that. When he'd asked me
what I wanted to try first, I'd grabbed the body chocolate because it
was the only thing in there that I knew what to do with.
Though
clearly I hadn't, since I didn't stop him from putting the damn thing
in the microwave.
“It
came as a package,” Hatcher said, his own cheeks stained pink. “The
website said it was a Valentine's Day exploration kit. There were
these hokey coupons, too. For sex and other things, like candlelit
dinners. It wasn't because I think sex with you is boring, Zeke. I
don't. But I've never been in a relationship with someone before, and
I kind of panicked about what to do for Valentine's Day. Leighton
recommended this sex toy site, and I swear to God, this box of things
was the least scary thing on it.”
Hatcher's
sister was one of my best friends, but she was a menace. Of course
she'd suggest sex toys for Valentine's Day. God damn Leighton. I'd
have to yell at her next time we Skyped.
Or
better yet, open up that vibrator and then give her details about
using it on her brother. That would teach her.
My
dick actually twitched a bit at the thought of going through the box
of toys now that I realized Hatcher was just as overwhelmed by them
as I was. And finding out that he hadn't gotten them because he
thought I was bad at sex helped, too. Now that I wasn't panicking
about him dumping me or worrying that I didn't satisfy him, I could
see how most of the things could actually be kind of fun. Not today,
of course. They all seemed to require a flexibility that I just
didn't have right now. But maybe soon.
The
thin sheet covering my lap didn't hide much, and Hatcher noticed my
interest pretty quickly. His eyebrows rose. “Really?”
I
shrugged. “Maybe the last song on the playlist wasn't that
optimistic,” I said, grinning when he leaned in closer and kissed
me.
“What
time is Chris back?”
He
usually didn't come back to the room til after lunch, which meant we
had plenty of time. I didn't think my injury was going to let us get
too crazy, but that didn't mean we couldn't mess around.
“He's
got an 11 a.m. class, and he'll probably hang out on campus after for
a bit,” I said, shifting over carefully to give Hatcher some room
to settle in on the bed.
He
darted in and kissed me on the nose. “So since Valentine's Day
didn't go so well for us, so I was thinking maybe we could do
something tonight.”
I
arched a brow at him. “Valentine’s Day, the sequel?”
“Too
much pressure. There are all these expectations for Valentine's Day.
It's
bound to be another disaster.
How about we celebrate President's Day instead?”
I
snorted out a laugh. “Because nothing says sexytimes like
President's Day?”
“Well,
it is
the
biggest mattress buying day of the year,” he said, wiggling his
eyebrows suggestively.
I
shook my head and drew him in for another kiss. “You're ridiculous.
Happy President's Day.”
I
could feel his smile against my lips. “Happiest President's Day
ever,” he murmured.
Blurb:
Incoming Credits
When Zeke's life at the exclusive boarding school
he attends is already hard enough with the stigma of being a
scholarship student and an art nerd, so being forced out of the
closet is the last thing he needs. Getting outed because someone
heard him mooning over the school's resident golden boy? Even worse.
High school ends in a blaze of misery for Zeke,
but that doesn't matter because he's on his way to Cornell. He'll
start over where no one knows him, and he'll finally be able to be
himself. He's so anxious to get started that he enrolls in a summer
program that offers incoming freshmen the chance to earn a few
credits and a stipend for helping out with a summer camp.
Zeke figured it would be easy to get over his
crush on Hatcher when he didn't have to see his stupidly perfect face
every day. Unfortunately, that's just a hypothesis...because
Hatcher's at Cornell, too, and he's suddenly interested in talking to
Zeke.
Zeke finds himself falling even harder for Hatcher
as their summer progresses. And surprisingly, Hatcher's not just
another pretty face. He's smart and funny, and it turns out that
boarding school was awful for him, too. He'd had money and
popularity, but he hadn't had many actual friends. It's a learning
curve for both of them, especially when Zeke learns that Hatcher is
gay. Helping him out of the closet is easy, especially when Zeke
offers to show him the ropes, so to speak, in a strictly
friends-with-benefits situation. Things get complicated when feelings
get introduced, and Zeke ends up learning just as much about himself
as he does about Hatcher.
Thursday, January 15, 2015
Lost: Motivation. If found, please return!
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We've also been struggling to get my son's med dosages right, and he's floundering a bit. Screaming tantrums and wild mood swings don't make it easy to write--and I'm including mine in there along with his. It's been a tough road lately, but we're coming through the other side soon, I hope.
He was absolutely amazed to see that my latest novel, Playing House, was dedicated to him. He knew it was about a character who had autism, like him, but he didn't realize that he was a big part of the reason I wrote it. So that was a bright point last month, getting to see the look on his face when he read the dedication. (And then promptly begged to read the book, which I had to yet again deny. He's an avid reader and wants to read all my books, but I've told him he has to be at least eighteen. And I've also promised that when he is eighteen he's going to want absolutely NOTHING to do with Mama's books...*g*)
I spent November getting a good solid start on my first YA book, so that's high on my WIP list for 2015. I'll be looking for a few good betas for that, since it's not a genre I'm hugely familiar with, so if you're good at YA pacing and dialogue drop me a line. Maybe if I had someone asking me for updates I'd be more likely to finish it up sooner rather than later!
Between the three book releases, holiday madness, and my son's struggles, I didn't have a lot of time or motivation to write in December. I started a lesbian short story (my first in that genre, and something I'd really like to finish even if I can't find it a publishing home), dabbled a bit on a paranormal manuscript that I've been pecking at for years, and shuffled things around in a few other WIPs I've been procrastinating on. I logged a total of about 10K words across those projects. All in all, not a great month.
The kids are finally back in school, even though the weather has caused closings and delays. Hopefully that will be behind us soon and I can get back into a regular writing groove--I miss it, and I'm worried at this rate that I won't have anything out in 2015!
I need to figure out how to unlock my motivation for 2015. My current plan is to fake it til I can make it...basically getting myself in front of my laptop and writing anything I can, even when I don't want to. What do you do when your motivation is nowhere to be found and your WIPs are piling up?
(No really, what do you do? Because I'm open to suggestions... *g*)
Friday, December 20, 2013
Is it research or procrastination? Bump up your word count by getting lazy
I've often had people ask me about my writing process, and I rarely give the same answer. It's not that I'm being evasive, but more that my process has changed over time and even changes day-to-day. Some days I sit down and struggle to write anything at all, and other times I sit down and bang out 10,000 words in less than 24 hours (in a hotel room over Thanksgiving shared with my husband and two young kiddos, no less).
My most successful writing days come when I can zone out and just write. I'm a world class procrastinator, and if given half the chance I will wander way from my manuscript and do just about everything under the sun other than write. So when I really need to get things done, I don't worry about researching specifics or finding the perfect word. I just channel my characters and write.
Will I need to do more work later on those parts? Definitely. My draft for my current WIP, Finding Home, is littered with notes like __need to research terminology on how rowers talk about strokes__ and __insert fancy-sounding craft beer name here__. Sometimes I can't find the right word to flow with the sentence, and I leave myself notes like __a word that means flighty but isn't flighty__. Or I realize that I can't remember some minor character's name even though I know I introduced him at the beginning, so I might write __the dude from the coffee shop from chapter one___ instead of breaking my concentration and going back to find the name itself. It's amazing how much more productive I am when I let the smaller things go instead of following a tangent down a rabbit hole and ending up spending an hour researching the craft brewing process when all I really needed was a throwaway sentence on how microbrews are conceived.
That's not to say that I don't research. I do, like a fiend. When I wrote Island House I didn't know a catamaran from a kayak, let alone how to tie anchor bend. (Now that I've brought it up, you know you can't resist learning the knot. Go ahead, there's the video...you wouldn't be reading about how to zone out and write productively if you could effectively avoid temptations like that one) I let myself get sidetracked by research, and as a result it took me almost three years to finish the manuscript.
I learned my lesson after that. I'm now 3/4 of the way through the follow-up to Island House, and the new outlook I've adopted on writing is definitely paying off. By giving myself permission to leave those places undeveloped so they don't interfere with the writing flow, I've taken away my excuses for procrastination and the roadblocks between me and a decent word count. Of course, there are still those inevitable days where I just can't seem to bring myself to string more than a sentence or two together. Now instead of being frustrated by them, I use them to go back and do the research I skipped and finish the scenes that I'd have gotten hung up otherwise.
This won't work for everyone, especially those of you who write linearly and need to perfect a scene before you move on. But it's a godsend for me, since if I'm not moving forward I lose interest. Or, you know, let a tiny bit of research hang me up so much that I put an almost completed manuscript on the back burner for three years before buckling down and finishing it.
A Dutch author actually hooked himself up to a gaggle of electrodes to monitor his brain function while writing. I have to say that while I'm curious about what goes on in my head while I'm writing, I don't think I'd take it that far. How about you?
My most successful writing days come when I can zone out and just write. I'm a world class procrastinator, and if given half the chance I will wander way from my manuscript and do just about everything under the sun other than write. So when I really need to get things done, I don't worry about researching specifics or finding the perfect word. I just channel my characters and write.
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A peek at notes from my latest WIP, Finding Home. |
That's not to say that I don't research. I do, like a fiend. When I wrote Island House I didn't know a catamaran from a kayak, let alone how to tie anchor bend. (Now that I've brought it up, you know you can't resist learning the knot. Go ahead, there's the video...you wouldn't be reading about how to zone out and write productively if you could effectively avoid temptations like that one) I let myself get sidetracked by research, and as a result it took me almost three years to finish the manuscript.
I learned my lesson after that. I'm now 3/4 of the way through the follow-up to Island House, and the new outlook I've adopted on writing is definitely paying off. By giving myself permission to leave those places undeveloped so they don't interfere with the writing flow, I've taken away my excuses for procrastination and the roadblocks between me and a decent word count. Of course, there are still those inevitable days where I just can't seem to bring myself to string more than a sentence or two together. Now instead of being frustrated by them, I use them to go back and do the research I skipped and finish the scenes that I'd have gotten hung up otherwise.
This won't work for everyone, especially those of you who write linearly and need to perfect a scene before you move on. But it's a godsend for me, since if I'm not moving forward I lose interest. Or, you know, let a tiny bit of research hang me up so much that I put an almost completed manuscript on the back burner for three years before buckling down and finishing it.
A Dutch author actually hooked himself up to a gaggle of electrodes to monitor his brain function while writing. I have to say that while I'm curious about what goes on in my head while I'm writing, I don't think I'd take it that far. How about you?
Thursday, November 14, 2013
Snippet from Finding Home
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Be sure to check out the posts if missed my release party over on the Dreamspinner Press blog. I shared snippets from the book and the inspiration behind some of my favorite parts of the novel. Don't fret if you missed the giveaways--there will be more chances to win goodies like the metal anchor bookmarks and the ceramic oil warmers from the prize packages on Twitter throughout the month.
I'm hard at work on the second book in the Dropping Anchor series, Finding Home. Here's a sneak peek at some of the dialogue from today's writing session:
Letting Clare choose where they ate would mean something vegetarian, or worse, vegan.“Can we stop for something on the way? You know she's not going to let us eat anywhere with actual food,” Ian pleaded.“The last time I did that she smelled the french fries the second she got in the car. I ended up on a three-day juice cleanse,” Niall said with a shudder that told Ian he wasn't exaggerating.“I did a juice cleanse once,” he offered.“A two-day bender where all you did was drink pineapple juice with rum is not a juice cleanse,” Niall retorted.“Lost six pounds,” Ian continued, ignoring the interruption.“Probably more from dehydration from all the sex than because of the juice,” Niall deadpanned.Ian considered it, then nodded. College spring break weeks were a guaranteed good time on Tortola. “Possibly.”--Finding Home, due out summer 2014
On the topic of beverages, apparently you can get Butterbeer at Starbucks! It's pretty chilly here in Indianapolis today, so maybe I'll treat myself to a magical hot drink this afternoon.
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